High School Major Work Writing

This is something that I wrote for school.

Click here to see the original spelling in Google Docs – it is terrible, hahahaha ~ 


She groaned and sat up stupidly.

“come on jenny” Sora said

“We need to get out of here. Use your magic.”

Jenny was a sorceress. Learned in the arts of healing, levitating, linguistics and other forms of magic.

“she stood up and pulled out one of her hairs, humming as she did so, instantly, with white, pure heat, two bars melted away, leaving enough space for the two to get out of the cages. But that was only the first stage.

“but what now” came the obvious remark from Sora.

“well theres only one door in this room, so we better start there.”

They scaled the walls quietly and went through the door, as quietly as they could have. they would have loved to just bolt in one direction and run to freedom, but stealth would be needed more.

“What will we tell the elders, back home?” said jenny

“I don’t know… do you think they will believe us if we tell them?”

“yeah you’re right, it won’t be a very convincing story,

‘Oh guess what, theres pirates over there behind the rock’… great…”

“I know!” Sora said a little loud.


“oh sorry… I know, we’ll get some proof that there are people here.”

So they explored the place, meeting no one, until they came to a door that had light pouring through the crack where it was opened. The two looked through and saw about twenty people all gathered there. there was a roaring fire in the middle of the room and people were gathered around it. at the end of the room there was a man speaking. he was obviously some sort of boss because he was on a pedestal and everyone was watching with all their attention, almost afraid of him. the two went away slowly and went down the corridor that the room branched off from. They found a door and it was locked. in shiny gold lettering there was written ~~Altariel~~

“This must be the bosses room!” Sora said. “can you open the lock?” he added.

“well I don’t know about this kind, but I can try.”

she again hummed, but just turned the doorknob and it clicked twice, then opened. They walked in and found some of the most amazing things, there were treasures of all kinds and beautiful writings on fabric on the walls. It was like a rose in a thorn field. The children stared in awe and then each grabbed an item, put it in their pockets and went back into the gloom of the cave.

“the pipes were probably air holes. In a tunnel like this with so many torches, you would need plenty of oxygen.” jenny said, looking at the rows of torches.

“look over there.” Said Sora pointing at a dark block.

“lets go check it out, it might lead to the way out of this place.”

So they headed towards the end of the tunnel and found a deep pool that shimmered with light.

“what do you think it is?”

said Jenny

“i think the shimmering is natural light! were saved!”

So without thinking, they jumped in and dived down towards the light, swimming with all their might. but the tunnel just kept going and going. They were beginning to get desperate, was this just some trap? did it end up anywhere? how ironic, that they would finish, going towards the light… but then, a flash of light signaled they had made it. they were free. They swam to shore and went to elexia.

“hey! theres pirates!”

“yeah they’re here”

“we have to fight them!”

“come on!”

“we have proof!”


rang the cries of Sora and jenny through the halls of the elders, but they just looked.


“one at a time…”

“let me talk Sora. Ok, elders of Elexia, me and Sora were running through the forests, and lost track of time, we went out of our land’s border and went into an unknown place. there we saw a boat of some kind coming out of a cave, it was very well concealed between a cliff and a huge rock sticking out, baring our town from view. we were captured, but escaped. so we are here to warn you.”

And then something happened that they did not expect.

some of the elders started laughing, talking, some angry, it was a shock to Sora and Jenny, so they just stood there.

“we elders already knew of the people. They are a people known to few people, as the Aqua-Nisenn they are sea traders and are very protective of their land, that is probably why they ambushed you. this enforces why  you should listen to your elders. now go to sleep.”